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Help me with my story?

For English, we wrote a story based on a picture. My friend said Y!Answers help a lot on giving opinions. My classmates graded me a 3 out of 5, and said I need a less predictable ending, which I’m not sure of. So here goes:

A month ago, when Sharon asked for a divorce, Charles had said “This would work out.” Now, he is not so sure. Sharon has not been coming home. Even when she does, they do not talk- just silences. Charles cannot find anything to talk about. They have nothing in common anymore, Charles knows this… Continue reading Help me with my story?

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